My Short Stories

There is not a lot of news to report in regards to the novel. The cover artist has been forced to delay getting started for reasons that are not only understandable but kind of exciting in their own way. I'll explain further once the artist has been announced.

In the meantime, I have been going back over the edited manuscript and figuring out the story beats for all the subplots in Book 2. I hit the road for a business trip on March 7th and I plan to have my stack of index cards ready by then so I can start working on the second volume during that trip.

But how would you like to read a couple of my stories right now? A pair of my short stories have just been published in the super-hero anthology The Sentinels: Alternate Visions.

I wrote the first one two years ago and I knocked out the second one last September. Both make references to Van Plexico's Sentinels series, but neither require having to read his books first. I'm pleased with both stories, I hope you enjoy them as well.

You can buy a copy directly from White Rocket Books or download the e-book for only $4.95 at the Lulu.com site.

It's exciting to see your work published and I have to thank Van for giving me this exposure. The Sentinels has been a successful enough series for a larger press to come in and buy the rights to it, so here's hoping the anthology can find the same audience.

Exciting Progress

Two major developments to report: the first round of copy editing is completed. I will now be going back over the manuscript, taking my own pass at catching errors and contradictions. Joe Crowe was extremely helpful and generous, so everybody give him a big hand.

The good news is Joe says he liked it! (yay!) He's the first person to read it and I either did not totally waste my time writing this thing or else he's just extremely kind. (Maybe both.) I could ask him for a review quote for use on the back cover of the book, but I'm afraid it might say something like "Great use of semi-colons! Complete command of apostrophes!" so maybe I won't do that.

The second major development is in regards to the cover art. I have agreed to terms with an artist that will be doing a painting for my cover. And, trust me, that particular understatement is a case of extreme restraint. I cannot express how excited and thrilled I am to have this particular artist working for me. His name might not be known to the general public at large, but to a certain percentage of the population his name is legendary.

He's had at least a 40-year career and I've personally been a fan of his work for over 20 years. Never in my life did I ever fathom that I could have him do something like this for me. Thank the wonders of the internet for allowing me to even track him down and correspond with him.

I won't announce the name just yet. But it's a done deal and it will happen. And regardless of whatever may be on the inside, at least my book is going to look fantastic!

So with a fully painted cover coming from one of my favorite artists, my excitement and enthusiasm for this project is not only renewed but off the charts. However, this does mean waiting a little bit longer before the book is available. I had been considering doing an advance edition with a simpler cover, but not now. I don't want to reduce the impact of the book coming out with the real cover right from the start.

In upcoming posts, I'll go into a little bit of how this book will be published and made available. I also have plenty of other character sketches on standby, waiting to be scanned in and shared.

Where Things Stand Now

Since I posted last week, the main development has been I've entered discussions with a particular artist from whom I hope to commission a cover painting. I'd rather not name the artist at this time because there's no deal in place yet, but suffice it to say he's a long-time professional and I'm a huge fan of his work.

To have the cover of my novel consist of a painting by this artist will be an unexpected thrill for me. I have spent time in the last week playing with design and composition ideas that I might want for the cover. No final decision has been made yet, but I can promise that it will not look anything like the mock-up I posted here a couple of weeks ago.

If this comes together like I want it to, this book is going to look fantastic!

In the meantime, the manuscript is still in Joe's hands for copy editing. Knowing my typing, it might take him a while. As I've skimmed through my copy, I've already noticed a couple of small details that need revising, but I'll hold off until I get the corrected copy from Joe. 

I have also created the interior illustration of the map. I rendered the whole thing in grayscale because it will be reproduced in black & white inside the book. I think it looks good, but I don't know how it will print. When I get my proof copy, I might discover the need to tweak the illustration.

I have also typed up some of the extra things that will go in the book. I've written the dedication, the acknowledgments, the "about the author" blurb and I've taken a shot at the descriptive text that will go on the back cover.

And to top it all off, I have spent a little bit of time the last couple of nights going over my outline and the notes on set action pieces that I have for Book 2.

It Is Done

Great news! I finished the book over the weekend! 

It was a tremendous feeling of accomplishment as I relished writing the epilogue scene. And then there was the final sentence. It was unplanned, I didn't know I wanted it until it poured out of me into the keyboard. A perfect little period at the end of a long journey.

The word count came out to about 97,000 words. It took me from November 27th, 2007 to February 8th, 2009. It's actually short for a novel by most publishing standards today, but I'm fine with that for a couple of reasons. One, this book is merely the first act to a larger story. I plan on collecting all three books into a single volume once I'm all done. Two, this is the story I wanted to tell. For better or worse, I wrote this book for me. I like it, I think it's fun. Hopefully, others will like it but I know that when I put a book out there to the public that I'm opening myself up for criticism from people that don't care I'm a first-time novelist.

Anyway... what's next?

The manuscript is currently in the hands of a copy editor. I want to give a big thank you to Joe Crowe who has generously offered to edit the whole thing at no cost. Joe is a copy editor by profession, working for the Birmingham News newspaper. He is also the Senior Editor and humor columnist for RevolutionSF.com.

Joe will catch all my spelling and grammatical errors as well as let me know if anything needs re-working or clarification. When I get it back from him, I'll also read it for contradictions and errors.

Even with the manuscript out of my hands, I have been busy this week. I've been working hard trying to commission artwork for the cover. I have approached painters specializing in fantasy work and I have approached artists who work in comics. I have received a lot of interest, as you might imagine when you step into the world of freelancers. 

Three artists in particular that have expressed interest have me excited based on the quality of their work. I won't mention names yet, but if negotiations are successful I should have a very exciting announcement to make very soon. 

As that's going on, I will soon also complete my own interior illustration of the obligatory map that most fantasy novels seem to feature. And then I have to turn my mind toward things like the book's Dedication, Acknowledgments and all the little things like that.

The main thing that will delay the release of the book is the artwork. That will take the most time. Everything else should be done by the time we get that in hand.

Maybe it's time to set up a website and start taking all those advance orders that I know we'll get...

The Next Step

This morning I began writing the final scene of the book. It's the final showdown that also serves to propel things forward into the next book, setting the stage for Book 2 in which the stakes are raised for everyone.

I'm giving myself two weeks because I want to make sure I nail the scene, but hopefully I can be done before then. I have already begun the next step. I'm now looking for a copy editor to go over the whole thing with a fresh perspective to eliminate contradictions and errors.

While it's in the editor's hands, I'll be working on an interior map illustration and searching for a cover artist. I have thrown together a mock-up of the cover design I want using my drawings. But I'd rather move away from my cartoony look and see it rendered in a finer painted style. The trick, of course, is to find someone good and affordable. Wish me luck.

I don't know how quickly or slowly things will progress once I hand over my finished draft, but I'm hopeful to have a book in my hand by the middle of March. Even if, at that point, it's only an advance rush copy without the final cover art.

It appears that the book will land somewhere between 90,000 and 100,000 words. A little longer than I anticipated when I first started writing, but not what would be considered a long novel in today's publishing world.